Everyone was excited to have a trip in our little boat, mums, dads, aunties, uncles and all the children.
They all wanted to bring bulging suitcases and buckets and spades.
Two men decided to fish and they caught the most enormous fish you have ever seen.
Our little boat drifted out to sea and was soon sinking under the huge waves.
A life boat came to rescue everyone and the captain said "you should have had a bigger boat".
Wednesday 6 May 2015
Thomas' 5 Sentence Challenge
Ironman is the best.
As round as a ball.
Sleepily I went to school.
My mummy is pretty and beautiful.
Playing nicely in the playground.
As round as a ball.
Sleepily I went to school.
My mummy is pretty and beautiful.
Playing nicely in the playground.
Charlie's 5 Sentence Challenge
Me and my family went fishing on a sunny afternoon.
We caught lots and lots of fish and was ready to turn back and come home.
When suddenly I felt something really big and strong on the end of the line.
My dad helped me to reel it in and when we saw it it was as long as a double decker bus.
It was a great white shark so I said to my dad I think were going to need a bigger boat.
We caught lots and lots of fish and was ready to turn back and come home.
When suddenly I felt something really big and strong on the end of the line.
My dad helped me to reel it in and when we saw it it was as long as a double decker bus.
It was a great white shark so I said to my dad I think were going to need a bigger boat.
Mia's 5 Sentence Challenge
Last Sunday Mia and dad hired a boat to go on an adventure.
They went through the jungle and saw a shark.
The shark waved and had a very scarey smile that was as long as a giraffes neck.
Suddenly the shark started to chase the boat, Mia and dad had to get away quickly.
They found a family of Meerkats stuck on an island, Mia wanted to rescue them all but dad said we are going to need a bigger boat.
They went through the jungle and saw a shark.
The shark waved and had a very scarey smile that was as long as a giraffes neck.
Suddenly the shark started to chase the boat, Mia and dad had to get away quickly.
They found a family of Meerkats stuck on an island, Mia wanted to rescue them all but dad said we are going to need a bigger boat.
Olivia P's 5 Sentence Challenge
I set off with my family on an amazing boat trip to see the sting rays.
The boat is packed with lots of people, we are going to need a bigger boat.
Excitedly we jumped into the sea and stroked the sting rays, they were enormous!
The sea was as warm as granddads toes in his slippers.
Smiling constantly we took lots of pictures.
The boat is packed with lots of people, we are going to need a bigger boat.
Excitedly we jumped into the sea and stroked the sting rays, they were enormous!
The sea was as warm as granddads toes in his slippers.
Smiling constantly we took lots of pictures.
Siobhan's 5 Sentence Challenge
I think we are going to need a bigger boat to travel to Australia.
The man said we are going to need a bigger boat for all the people at the party.
The people are saying we are going to need a bigger boat because this boat is sinking.
The children said we need a bigger boat as big as a whale.
The man said we need a bigger boat for the children to land home safe.
The man said we are going to need a bigger boat for all the people at the party.
The people are saying we are going to need a bigger boat because this boat is sinking.
The children said we need a bigger boat as big as a whale.
The man said we need a bigger boat for the children to land home safe.
Lily's 5 Sentence Challenge
We are going to need a bigger boat or we are going to sink.
The wavers are crashing down. We are gowing to need a biger boat.
Too many pirates tried to climb aboard, we are going to need a bigger boat cried the captain.
We are going to need a bigger boat because we have caught too many fish.
We will need a bigger boat said the captan as he saw the size of the shark that he was trying to catch.
The wavers are crashing down. We are gowing to need a biger boat.
Too many pirates tried to climb aboard, we are going to need a bigger boat cried the captain.
We are going to need a bigger boat because we have caught too many fish.
We will need a bigger boat said the captan as he saw the size of the shark that he was trying to catch.
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