"Hurry up, we are going to mis the boat!" I screamed.
Quickly we drove towards the boat.
Would we make it?
Seagulls squawked, the engine roared, people dashed around and we were of.
"We are going to need a bigger boar next time," the captain shouted.
Wow Oliver! This is a very well written 5SC post. Your use of quotes and great words such as "screamed, squawked, roared, shouted" make this writing very exciting.
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