Wednesday, 6 May 2015

Brody's 5 Sentence Challenge

John and Michael were out fishing. It was all quiet when suddenly they caught a gigantic fish. Screaming, John said "that looks bigger than 2000 meters, we are going to need a bigger boat."
The fish swam off taking John, Michael and the boat with him. Will we ever see them again?

Jaimee's 5 Sentence Challenge

We need a bigger boat because there are too many passengers.
We are travelling across the Atlantic ocean to America.
We need a bigger boat because the waves are too big and would turn our small boat over.
We need a bigger boat because we need to copy everybodys car.
We need a bigger ship because people want to see far far away.

Bear's 5 Sentence Challenge

Uncle Paul and my 3 cousins who live in New Zealand bought a small boat to go fishing.
One day they went out to sea and caught lots of fish. They were so excited.
The big waves came and went over the boat and everyone got wet.
A massive storm had started, they saw a swimmer in the sea who needed help, they let him on board.
They went back to shore with a very full boat. My uncle said, "We are going to need a bigger boat next time."

Lucas' 5 Sentence Challenge

Carefaly, we put the picnic on the boat oh no it doesn't fit.
Mum and dad said we need a bigger boat "Lets make our own" said Sam and Sally.
It can be as long as a train and as wide as an aroeplane.
They all zoomed to find the driftwood and returned in a flash.
Pull! Pull! Pull! Hooray! We did it! A new and better boat!

Robert's 5 Sentence Challenge

How enormous is the boat? asked Hulk.
it's huge but will have to fit on it said iron man. We're going to need a bigger boat!
Lets fly to the shop and buy one as big as a full bus.
Wait Hulk might destroy the shop.
Lets leav Hulk behind and go to the shops incase he gets mad.

Jay's 5 Sentence Challenge

We need a bigger boat so we can all fit in.
So we can see the dolfins.
So we can see the hole world.
So we will be safe from the sharks.
So we can go fishing.

Samuel's 5 Sentence Challenge

We are going to the Antartic on a resurch boat.
I am bisi chating.
I did not see the ice berg floating to us.
The ice berg smashed in to the boat.
So that's why we need a bigger boat.