Friday 14 November 2014

Shanice's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house looks scary. NO children live in the haunted house. Only the brave enter the house. On Halloween spooky noises can be heard. I would live in the house.

Olivia W's 5 Sentence Challenge

It is a fundree nite. It is very spoocee. Wot dus it feel like. A ghost liv inside. It is dark and scary.

Brody's 5 Sentence Challenge

Ten vampires live in the haunted house. The vampires look evil. There are dirty cobwebs all over the house. It is always dark and scary. I want to go there

Tuesday 11 November 2014

Oliver's 5 Sentence Challenge

"Crash, Bang" wet the thunder! Lightning struck the broken windows and nearly killed the white, deadly cat. Nervously I knocked on the door but there was no answer...Suddenly the huge, black door banged open and I tiptoed inside. I saw a bright, yellow light but "Aagh!" I fell into a deep booby trap. Would I ever get out?

Charlie's 5 Sentence Challenge

As I knocked at the door of the haunted house I heard loud screams.
When i stepped inside the haunted house it was very dark and cold.
I creeped up the stairs and felt something brush past me.
I saw something run to the back of the room.

I was really scared so I turned the light on and it was my cat tiger.

Jay's 5 Sentence Challenge

A skeleton lived in the haunted house.
Slugs were crawling all over the smocelams.
Spiders had made webs everywhere.
The doors creep.

The floorboards were creaky.

Nyanda's 5 Sentence Challenge

In the haunted house there lived a scary witch.
The haunted house looks very dark.
In the haunted house there lives a spooky ghost with a loud voice.
No one live in a haunted house because it’s scary.

I think if I go in a haunted house I will be eaten.

Mia's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house is spooky.
There are sum vampires that liv at the house.
Inside the house ther are sum terrible cobwebs.
At the house livs a scarily talking cat.

The talking cat has a smile as long as a girafs neck.

Ava's 5 Sentence Challenge

It is very spooky in the haunted house.
The ghost left the light on in the haunted house.
There are scary gargoyles guarding the gates.
There is lightning crashing into the trees.

The haunted house is pitch black.

Lucas' 5 Sentence Challenge

The wich lived at the haunted house.
The house was spooky and had scary noises.
Carefully I tried not to be seen by the evil witch.
The witch looked like an old hairy granny.

She was as wrinkly as a worm.

Thomas M's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house is haunted.
I was very scared when I got to the house.
The spooky house is dark and creepy.
Carefully, we crept along the floor so we did not disturb the ghosts.

The house made my heart beat real fast.

Lily's 5 Sentence Challenge

An old ghost called Billy in a haunted house on the hill.
Billy lived in the house all alone with nobody to play with.
One day a little girl called Rose decided to visit the house.
Fearfully Rose walked up the path and knocked on the door but nobody answered.

Rose walked in through the door and Billy screamed “Boo”.

Kayden's 5 Sentence Challenge

One day I walked into a house that was so haunted it was as scary as a monster.
I nearly got eaten by a huge monster i was so mega scared and it was covered in slime and really disgusting.
I would be scared.
Nervously I crept inside.

My heart was beating fast.

Evie's 5 Sentence Challenge

The haunted hosue looks spooky.
The zombie house has scary window eyes.
If someone comes in the zombie will eat them.
The haunted house is awake and will eat you.

Zombies come to the scary house. 

Milo's 5 Sentence Challenge

The witches face was as green as grass.
A skeleton lives in the house.
Spiders crawl on the floor.
Softly bats flew in the sky.

Spiders make webs in the windows. 

Owen's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house is dark.
Ghostly things happened in this house.
I will see a vampire.
The vampire will be noty.

I will feel terribly scared.

Laila's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house is scary.
It is a stormy night.
Witches are around on this dangerous night.
There is cobwebs in the haunted house.

Electrical lightning has broken the lights, it is dark.

Jaimee's 5 Sentence Challenge

The haunted house looks dark and scary.
The vampire the lives there killed everyone in the house.
The attic is filled with vampire bats that fly at night,
If you enter the house you will surely die.

The walls are full of blood and scratches where people have tried to escape.

Sophie's 5 Sentence Challenge

The spooky house with traps.
A ghost flew out of the cobwebbed window.
The storm put a hole in the rood then rain leaked in.
I crept along the corridor and saw a bat.

A spooky girl appeared from nowhere and said hello Sophie quietly. 

Samuel's 5 Sentence Challenge

The haunted house has lots of storms thunder and lightning.
They heer the funder and lightning.
The vampire lives in the haunted house.
They frightened people.

The vampire looks scary. 

Max S' 5 Sentence Challenge

Scared and frightened I tiptoed into the haunted house.
Inside lived a wicked witch and a naughty vampire.
The dark attic was covered with horrible cobwebs.
There was a cat as black as a stormy night hissing on the door step.

All around the spooky house black bats flapped and squeaked. 

Thomas Mc's 5 Sentence Challenge

It looks scary.
It is dark.
It has lots of big windows.
It was like a giant monster.

The lightening crashed on the roof.

Siobhan's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house is very big and scary.
Scary eyes look out from the upstairs window.
I walked into the garden and sat in a tree was an owl with big, green eyes.
Inside the house lives a vampire with big teeth and a long coat.

In the kitchen stood a large chocolate cake with strawberry jam. 

Mary's 5 Sentence Challenge

A haunted house is scary.
It can have bats inside.
It also has cobwebs so it must have lots of spiders.
There could be some ghosts and skeletons.

Bravely, Scooby Doo and his friends go into the haunted house. 

Olivia P's 5 Sentence Challenge

The haunted house is a dark and scary place to live.
In the haunted house they may have some witches and ghosts.
Vampire bats fly around the house and scare people if anybody comes near.
Spooky noises came from inside the house as I banged on the big, black door.

I creep around the house without the witches hearing me but all I could hear was ghosts noises.

Donovan's 5 Sentence Challenge

The staircase is as long as a giant snake.
It looks very scary and spooky.
There are lots of ghosts and vampires.
The zombies will catch you.


Robert's 5 Sentence Challenge

The haunted house is very spooky.
The lightning came down and struck the roof with big bolts.
I went inside the house and it was full of bats and they had red eyes.
The bats floo around my head so I ran upstairs.

I saw a Dracula and he had blud running down his fas.

Gabrielle's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house is scary and dark.
Outside the lightning is flashing in the black sky.
Inside I can hear moaning zombies looking for people to eat.
Scary skeletons are hanging in the wardrobe.

Quickly I run out of the spooky house as fast as a galloping horse. 

Riley's 5 Sentence Challenge

In the haunted house lived three scary ghosts.
The ghosts were called Riley, Tom and Milo.
They spent all day flying around the scary, spooky corridors.
The whole neighbourhood were scared of the spooky ghosts.

One day the ghost busters came and zapped the three scary ghosts away.

Our first 5 Sentence Challenge!


For our homework last weekend, we all had a go at our first 5 Sentence Challenge. The prompt was ...Haunted House... We loved it! The words we used the most are in the witches hat above. Have a look at our sentences and see what you think.