Everyone was excited to have a trip in our little boat, mums, dads, aunties, uncles and all the children.
They all wanted to bring bulging suitcases and buckets and spades.
Two men decided to fish and they caught the most enormous fish you have ever seen.
Our little boat drifted out to sea and was soon sinking under the huge waves.
A life boat came to rescue everyone and the captain said "you should have had a bigger boat".
Wednesday 6 May 2015
Thomas' 5 Sentence Challenge
Ironman is the best.
As round as a ball.
Sleepily I went to school.
My mummy is pretty and beautiful.
Playing nicely in the playground.
As round as a ball.
Sleepily I went to school.
My mummy is pretty and beautiful.
Playing nicely in the playground.
Charlie's 5 Sentence Challenge
Me and my family went fishing on a sunny afternoon.
We caught lots and lots of fish and was ready to turn back and come home.
When suddenly I felt something really big and strong on the end of the line.
My dad helped me to reel it in and when we saw it it was as long as a double decker bus.
It was a great white shark so I said to my dad I think were going to need a bigger boat.
We caught lots and lots of fish and was ready to turn back and come home.
When suddenly I felt something really big and strong on the end of the line.
My dad helped me to reel it in and when we saw it it was as long as a double decker bus.
It was a great white shark so I said to my dad I think were going to need a bigger boat.
Mia's 5 Sentence Challenge
Last Sunday Mia and dad hired a boat to go on an adventure.
They went through the jungle and saw a shark.
The shark waved and had a very scarey smile that was as long as a giraffes neck.
Suddenly the shark started to chase the boat, Mia and dad had to get away quickly.
They found a family of Meerkats stuck on an island, Mia wanted to rescue them all but dad said we are going to need a bigger boat.
They went through the jungle and saw a shark.
The shark waved and had a very scarey smile that was as long as a giraffes neck.
Suddenly the shark started to chase the boat, Mia and dad had to get away quickly.
They found a family of Meerkats stuck on an island, Mia wanted to rescue them all but dad said we are going to need a bigger boat.
Olivia P's 5 Sentence Challenge
I set off with my family on an amazing boat trip to see the sting rays.
The boat is packed with lots of people, we are going to need a bigger boat.
Excitedly we jumped into the sea and stroked the sting rays, they were enormous!
The sea was as warm as granddads toes in his slippers.
Smiling constantly we took lots of pictures.
The boat is packed with lots of people, we are going to need a bigger boat.
Excitedly we jumped into the sea and stroked the sting rays, they were enormous!
The sea was as warm as granddads toes in his slippers.
Smiling constantly we took lots of pictures.
Siobhan's 5 Sentence Challenge
I think we are going to need a bigger boat to travel to Australia.
The man said we are going to need a bigger boat for all the people at the party.
The people are saying we are going to need a bigger boat because this boat is sinking.
The children said we need a bigger boat as big as a whale.
The man said we need a bigger boat for the children to land home safe.
The man said we are going to need a bigger boat for all the people at the party.
The people are saying we are going to need a bigger boat because this boat is sinking.
The children said we need a bigger boat as big as a whale.
The man said we need a bigger boat for the children to land home safe.
Lily's 5 Sentence Challenge
We are going to need a bigger boat or we are going to sink.
The wavers are crashing down. We are gowing to need a biger boat.
Too many pirates tried to climb aboard, we are going to need a bigger boat cried the captain.
We are going to need a bigger boat because we have caught too many fish.
We will need a bigger boat said the captan as he saw the size of the shark that he was trying to catch.
The wavers are crashing down. We are gowing to need a biger boat.
Too many pirates tried to climb aboard, we are going to need a bigger boat cried the captain.
We are going to need a bigger boat because we have caught too many fish.
We will need a bigger boat said the captan as he saw the size of the shark that he was trying to catch.
Brody's 5 Sentence Challenge
John and Michael were out fishing. It was all quiet when suddenly they caught a gigantic fish. Screaming, John said "that looks bigger than 2000 meters, we are going to need a bigger boat."
The fish swam off taking John, Michael and the boat with him. Will we ever see them again?
The fish swam off taking John, Michael and the boat with him. Will we ever see them again?
Jaimee's 5 Sentence Challenge
We need a bigger boat because there are too many passengers.
We are travelling across the Atlantic ocean to America.
We need a bigger boat because the waves are too big and would turn our small boat over.
We need a bigger boat because we need to copy everybodys car.
We need a bigger ship because people want to see far far away.
We are travelling across the Atlantic ocean to America.
We need a bigger boat because the waves are too big and would turn our small boat over.
We need a bigger boat because we need to copy everybodys car.
We need a bigger ship because people want to see far far away.
Bear's 5 Sentence Challenge
Uncle Paul and my 3 cousins who live in New Zealand bought a small boat to go fishing.
One day they went out to sea and caught lots of fish. They were so excited.
The big waves came and went over the boat and everyone got wet.
A massive storm had started, they saw a swimmer in the sea who needed help, they let him on board.
They went back to shore with a very full boat. My uncle said, "We are going to need a bigger boat next time."
One day they went out to sea and caught lots of fish. They were so excited.
The big waves came and went over the boat and everyone got wet.
A massive storm had started, they saw a swimmer in the sea who needed help, they let him on board.
They went back to shore with a very full boat. My uncle said, "We are going to need a bigger boat next time."
Lucas' 5 Sentence Challenge
Carefaly, we put the picnic on the boat oh no it doesn't fit.
Mum and dad said we need a bigger boat "Lets make our own" said Sam and Sally.
It can be as long as a train and as wide as an aroeplane.
They all zoomed to find the driftwood and returned in a flash.
Pull! Pull! Pull! Hooray! We did it! A new and better boat!
Mum and dad said we need a bigger boat "Lets make our own" said Sam and Sally.
It can be as long as a train and as wide as an aroeplane.
They all zoomed to find the driftwood and returned in a flash.
Pull! Pull! Pull! Hooray! We did it! A new and better boat!
Robert's 5 Sentence Challenge
How enormous is the boat? asked Hulk.
it's huge but will have to fit on it said iron man. We're going to need a bigger boat!
Lets fly to the shop and buy one as big as a full bus.
Wait Hulk might destroy the shop.
Lets leav Hulk behind and go to the shops incase he gets mad.
it's huge but will have to fit on it said iron man. We're going to need a bigger boat!
Lets fly to the shop and buy one as big as a full bus.
Wait Hulk might destroy the shop.
Lets leav Hulk behind and go to the shops incase he gets mad.
Jay's 5 Sentence Challenge
We need a bigger boat so we can all fit in.
So we can see the dolfins.
So we can see the hole world.
So we will be safe from the sharks.
So we can go fishing.
So we can see the dolfins.
So we can see the hole world.
So we will be safe from the sharks.
So we can go fishing.
Samuel's 5 Sentence Challenge
We are going to the Antartic on a resurch boat.
I am bisi chating.
I did not see the ice berg floating to us.
The ice berg smashed in to the boat.
So that's why we need a bigger boat.
I am bisi chating.
I did not see the ice berg floating to us.
The ice berg smashed in to the boat.
So that's why we need a bigger boat.
Ava's 5 Sentence Challenge
We need a bigger boat because it wont fit enough people in it to catch fish.
The ship is as big as the titanic.
Quickly the boat moves and rocks.
The people were falling and tumbling over the side of the boat.
Screeming the captain said abandon ship.
The ship is as big as the titanic.
Quickly the boat moves and rocks.
The people were falling and tumbling over the side of the boat.
Screeming the captain said abandon ship.
Olivia W's 5 Sentence Challenge
We are going to need a bigger boat because everybody is going to the same place.
We are going to need a bigger boat because the waves are to big.
We are going to need a bigger boat because we are going to cary lots of animuls.
We need a bigger boat because we are going to put a tree in it.
We need a bigger boat because we are going to hav a bunch o pepul.
We are going to need a bigger boat because the waves are to big.
We are going to need a bigger boat because we are going to cary lots of animuls.
We need a bigger boat because we are going to put a tree in it.
We need a bigger boat because we are going to hav a bunch o pepul.
Oliver's 5 Sentence Challenge
"Hurry up, we are going to mis the boat!" I screamed.
Quickly we drove towards the boat.
Would we make it?
Seagulls squawked, the engine roared, people dashed around and we were of.
"We are going to need a bigger boar next time," the captain shouted.
Quickly we drove towards the boat.
Would we make it?
Seagulls squawked, the engine roared, people dashed around and we were of.
"We are going to need a bigger boar next time," the captain shouted.
Our 5 Sentence Challenge
Because we are so good at writing, we had a go at the 5 sentence challenge again. This time we used the phrase "... we are going to need a bigger boat..."
We have written some brilliant sentences with adverbs, similes and even speech marks!
What do you think of our sentences?
We have written some brilliant sentences with adverbs, similes and even speech marks!
What do you think of our sentences?
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