Tuesday, 11 November 2014

Charlie's 5 Sentence Challenge

As I knocked at the door of the haunted house I heard loud screams.
When i stepped inside the haunted house it was very dark and cold.
I creeped up the stairs and felt something brush past me.
I saw something run to the back of the room.

I was really scared so I turned the light on and it was my cat tiger.
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  1. Ms. Russell13 November 2014 at 17:40

    Hi Charlie!
    I enjoyed reading your post about the haunted house! You did a good job creating tension in your sentences and I loved your suprise ending! I'm glad it was just a cat! Keep up the great writing!

    Ms. Russell
    Team 5sc
    Markham, Ontario, Canada

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