The house is very big and scary.
Scary eyes look out from the upstairs window.
I walked into the garden and sat in a tree was an owl with
big, green eyes.
Inside the house lives a vampire with big teeth and a long
coat.
In the kitchen stood a large chocolate cake with strawberry
jam.
Hello Siobhan,
ReplyDeleteYour haunted house is very scary. I could imagine scary eyes at windows and thought you were brave to walk into the garden especially if you knew there was a vampire.
While the large chocolate cake with strawberry jam seems tasty, I wonder if it was a vampire trick to try to get you to go inside?
Well done.
Ross Mannell (Team 5SC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Well done Siobhan. Really proud of you. People reading your work in Australia. Amazing. Mummy. Xxxx
ReplyDeleteWell done Siobhan. We are so proud of you. Mummy. X X X X X
ReplyDeleteWell done Siobhan. Really proud of you. Xxx
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