Hi Mary, Thank you for your entry this week! My favourite part was your line about the cobwebs and the spiders. What a great sentence! I also like how you used the active adjective "bravely" to transition into the last part of your piece! Keep up the good work!
Hi Mary,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your entry this week! My favourite part was your line about the cobwebs and the spiders. What a great sentence! I also like how you used the active adjective "bravely" to transition into the last part of your piece!
Keep up the good work!
Ms. Russell
Team 5sc
Markham, Ontario, Canada