The haunted house looks dark and scary.
The vampire the lives there killed everyone in the house.
The attic is filled with vampire bats that fly at night,
If you enter the house you will surely die.
The walls are full of blood and scratches where people have
tried to escape.
Ooooh Jaimee, your story makes me feel very nervous! I love the warning not to enter the house. I wondered if this would be better as the ending but then read on and heard what would happen if I did go in!
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