Wednesday 6 May 2015

Charlie's 5 Sentence Challenge

Me and my family went fishing on a sunny afternoon.
We caught lots and lots of fish and was ready to turn back and come home.
When suddenly I felt something really big and strong on the end of the line.
My dad helped me to reel it in and when we saw it it was as long as a double decker bus.
It was a great white shark so I said to my dad I think were going to need a bigger boat.

1 comment:

  1. How exciting! I think you would definitely need a bigger boat! I love the way you have used a simile 'as long as a double decker bus' and the way you described 'lots and lots' of fish. 5 great sentences Joey
    Mrs Addison 5SCC

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