Eva's 5 sentence challenge

'I feel scared, what if the train goes too fast' said the little girl holding her dolly tightly.
The man carried his suitcases that were as heavy as an elephant.
Patiently the little girl waits to board the train.
The train station was busy and full of people waiting to go on their holiday.
Jumping with excitement, the children could not wait to get on the train.

Evie's 5 sentence challenge

 The Engineer fixed the wheels as quick as a flash. The Sailor bought a train ticket back to his ship. Strongly, the porter pushed the heavy cases. The family caught the train to London. Excitedly, the boy waved at the passing bird.

Aidan's 5 sentence challenge

The children watched the man oil the train. Happily, the sailor got his ticket for the journey. The conductor is waving the next train into platform number 6. Sadly, the man in the red hat couldn't find a trolley. The family are going on their holiday on the red train.

Saoirse's 5 sentence challenge

The station is steamy like a dragon's breath. The ruby red train whistles loudly like a kettle. The workers are helpful, carrying bags and giving directions. Excitedly, the passengers line up with their tickets. At the platforms the trains wait patiently to be filled with passengers and OFF THEY GO!

Anya's 5 sentence challenge

The little girl is watching the very good man fix the train.  She is singing her song. Then she go’s to get some sweets for her mummy , daddy , herself because she likes sweets. But her mum, dad did not know where she was and when she got back her mama,dada was not there. She was so so so so so wrured but happly the poleas found her she was so so realeefed. 

Gemma's 5 sentence challenge

The train is a colourful dark blue. The people are excited to go on the train. The numbers tell you what gate you have to go in. When the train doors open the people go inside. When they start to go the man tells them where to go.

Alex's 5 sentence challenge

With a smile on his face the mechanic oiled the train engine. In single file the family went to board the train to begin their journey. The pigeons are pecking the ground on the platform for any crumbs of food. The porter pushed his heavily loaded trolley along the platform. The children wait patiently for their tickets from the ticket stand for the train which will take them on their holidays.