The children watched the man oil the train. Happily, the sailor got his ticket for the journey. The conductor is waving the next train into platform number 6. Sadly, the man in the red hat couldn't find a trolley. The family are going on their holiday on the red train.
Good work Aidan! I really like how you have started some sentences with adverbs to tell the reader how the different people are feeling.
ReplyDeleteNice sentences, Aidan. You are a good observer, and have enriched your sentences with a lot of interesting details about what's going on in the picture. Well done!
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