Monday 5 May 2014

Saoirse's 5 sentence challenge

The station is steamy like a dragon's breath. The ruby red train whistles loudly like a kettle. The workers are helpful, carrying bags and giving directions. Excitedly, the passengers line up with their tickets. At the platforms the trains wait patiently to be filled with passengers and OFF THEY GO!
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown6 May 2014 at 14:13

    That's great, Saoirse and her class mates are really clever, some big wow words in there!!!

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  2. Anonymous21 May 2014 at 14:56

    Nice sentences, with a lot of clever metaphors. Well done, Saoirse!
    Franco

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  3. Anonymous27 May 2014 at 06:26

    I love reading these sentences about the train station Saoirse. They make me feel really excited! Well done!

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