The little girl is watching the very good man fix the
train. She is singing her song. Then she
go’s to get some sweets for her mummy , daddy , herself because she likes
sweets. But her mum, dad did not know where she was and when she got back her
mama,dada was not there. She was so so so so so wrured but happly the poleas
found her she was so so realeefed.
A really good try Anya! I like how you've remembered to use commas in a list and how the girl changed from worried to relieved when the police found her! Could you think of a different way to describe the man than 'very good'?
ReplyDelete...Very creative sentences, Anya!
ReplyDeleteYou have been very original, and this made your work interesting. Well done!
Franco