Monday 5 May 2014

Eva's 5 sentence challenge

'I feel scared, what if the train goes too fast' said the little girl holding her dolly tightly.
The man carried his suitcases that were as heavy as an elephant.
Patiently the little girl waits to board the train.
The train station was busy and full of people waiting to go on their holiday.
Jumping with excitement, the children could not wait to get on the train.

2 comments:

  1. Fantastic sentences Eva! I really like your simile and the adverb 'patiently'.

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  2. ...Very nice piece of work, Eva.
    Good use of interesting words and correct spelling. Well done!

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