Choo choo, this train will soon be leaving shouts the man. I think it is going to the sunny seaside, beautiful Brighton. Excited children whisper will it be the smoky blue train or the fire engine colour train? Quickly the people get their tickets and look very happy.
well done Hollie.xx
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ReplyDeleteI tried to post a comment last week, but there was a problem and I see that it wasn't posted after all. I just wanted to make sure I popped back in to check as it was such a super piece of writing. I particularly loved your sentence which starts "Excited children whisper..." and you even included a question mark. Very well done indeed!
Keep up the good work.
Mrs Ower (Team 5SC)
Costa del Sol, Spain
Well done, Holly, I like your sentences. You have good fantasy!
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