Tuesday 6 May 2014

Lucy's 5 sentence challenge

Quickly, the mechanic mended the train.

Excitedly, the family boarded the train.

Foolishly, the boys played too close to the track.

Like ants, the passengers rushed around the station.

Shouting, the lady demanded to know when the next train to London would be leaving.

2 comments:

  1. Very nice: nice sentences, with good use of interesting words.
    Well done!
    Franco

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  2. Good sentences Lucy! I really like the adverbs you have used as well as comparing the passengers to ants. Keep it up!

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