Tuesday 6 May 2014

Jack's 5 sentence challenge

You can only board the train through gates 7 and 8.
The porter is pushing all the cases to the train.
The children are excited about going on holiday.
There is a man fixing the steam train.
There are lots of people dashing about.
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 May 2014 at 11:57

    Well done, Jack. You are a good observer!

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  2. Anonymous24 May 2014 at 10:34

    Good sentences Jack! I really like the word 'dashing' to tell the reader that the people are all walking quickly. Keep it up!

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