Wednesday 7 May 2014

Niamh's 5 sentence challenge

The red shooting train sat in a very busy and very big train station. Everyone was waiting for their trains rushing and running around. People where dashing to get there tickets for their summer holidays. The platforms where full of excited people. Nobody wanted to got on the slow sluggish steam train.
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  1. Anonymous19 May 2014 at 13:51

    Lovely sentences Niamh! I really like the alliteration- slow, sluggish steam train. Well done!

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  2. Anonymous21 May 2014 at 14:31

    Very nice sentences, Niamh. You are a good observer, and have put a lot of nice words in your sentences. Well done!
    Franco

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