Thursday 8 May 2014

Zach B's 5 sentence challenge


As fast as the wind, went the train as it left the station.



Quietly the children waited for their train tickets.



The train has stopped, waiting for the people to board on their way to New York.



The sailor is waiting to get his ticket from the office



Shouting, the Controller told the passengers the time of the train.

2 comments:

  1. Well done Zach. I think the train will go very quickly to New York. Uncle Dom in Australia

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  2. Lovely sentences Zach! I really like your simile and adverb 'quietly'. Well done!

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