Wednesday 7 May 2014

Lillie- Mai's 5 sentence challenge

The people were at the train station. They were there to meet their friend's. They enjoyed watching the train's pull up. It was a very nice day. The picture's look interesting.
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2 comments:

  1. Joeys Year 119 May 2014 at 13:52

    A good try Lillie- Mai. I like how you are guessing why the people might be there and how they might be feeling.

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  2. Anonymous21 May 2014 at 14:37

    ...Very simple and nice sentences, Lillie Mai.
    Good effort. Well done, carry on like this!
    Franco

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