Steaming gently, engine 109 waited patiently for the passengers
The engineer worked hard to oil the wheels, no more squeaks now
The children waited excitedly to pass through the gate onto platform no.8, which train is it mummy?
Looking and waiting, the little girl listened, she could hear lots on new sounds, a hiss, a bang, children laughing, parents talking and the constant click click of another ticket sold
The station master, high up in his box, shouts out a warning, train leaving platform 7 in two minutes for Whitby, all passengers hurry up.
Lovely sentences Claudia! I really like how you've started a sentence with 'Looking and waiting...' and described all the noises that the little girl might hear- keep up the hard work!
ReplyDelete...Long sentences with nice and interesting words, which described well the context. Well done, Claudia. Carry on like this!
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