Tuesday, 6 May 2014

Louis' 5 sentence challenge

The train station was very crowded.

Excitedly the children waited to board the train.


The people were pushing past each other.


Crying,the boy thought he had lost his mummy.


Suddenly the family realised they were on the wrong platform.

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 May 2014 at 15:29

    Well done, Louis!
    Nice sentences, and good use of words.
    Franco

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  2. Anonymous24 May 2014 at 10:37

    Good sentences Louis! I like how you have started your sentence with 'Crying, ...' and how you have used adverbs. Well done!

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