Thursday 8 May 2014

Lily- Rose's 5 sentence challenge

There are so many people shuffling through the gates. The trains smoke is as fluffy as the clouds. The conductor is as tall as a giant. The train stops slowly. The black train is as dark as the night.
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  1. Anonymous18 May 2014 at 11:17

    Lovely writing Lily-Rose. I really like your adverb and similes! Keep it up!

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  2. Anonymous21 May 2014 at 14:24

    Nice methaphoric sentences, Lily Rose. Well done, carry on like this!
    Franco

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