Shanice's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house looks scary. NO children live in the haunted house. Only the brave enter the house. On Halloween spooky noises can be heard. I would live in the house.

Olivia W's 5 Sentence Challenge

It is a fundree nite. It is very spoocee. Wot dus it feel like. A ghost liv inside. It is dark and scary.

Brody's 5 Sentence Challenge

Ten vampires live in the haunted house. The vampires look evil. There are dirty cobwebs all over the house. It is always dark and scary. I want to go there

Oliver's 5 Sentence Challenge

"Crash, Bang" wet the thunder! Lightning struck the broken windows and nearly killed the white, deadly cat. Nervously I knocked on the door but there was no answer...Suddenly the huge, black door banged open and I tiptoed inside. I saw a bright, yellow light but "Aagh!" I fell into a deep booby trap. Would I ever get out?

Charlie's 5 Sentence Challenge

As I knocked at the door of the haunted house I heard loud screams.

When i stepped inside the haunted house it was very dark and cold.

I creeped up the stairs and felt something brush past me.

I saw something run to the back of the room.

I was really scared so I turned the light on and it was my cat tiger.

Jay's 5 Sentence Challenge

A skeleton lived in the haunted house.

Slugs were crawling all over the smocelams.

Spiders had made webs everywhere.

The doors creep.

The floorboards were creaky.

Nyanda's 5 Sentence Challenge

In the haunted house there lived a scary witch.

The haunted house looks very dark.

In the haunted house there lives a spooky ghost with a loud voice.

No one live in a haunted house because it’s scary.

I think if I go in a haunted house I will be eaten.

Mia's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house is spooky.

There are sum vampires that liv at the house.

Inside the house ther are sum terrible cobwebs.

At the house livs a scarily talking cat.

The talking cat has a smile as long as a girafs neck.

Ava's 5 Sentence Challenge

It is very spooky in the haunted house.

The ghost left the light on in the haunted house.

There are scary gargoyles guarding the gates.

There is lightning crashing into the trees.

The haunted house is pitch black.

Lucas' 5 Sentence Challenge

The wich lived at the haunted house.

The house was spooky and had scary noises.

Carefully I tried not to be seen by the evil witch.

The witch looked like an old hairy granny.

She was as wrinkly as a worm.

Thomas M's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house is haunted.

I was very scared when I got to the house.

The spooky house is dark and creepy.

Carefully, we crept along the floor so we did not disturb the ghosts.

The house made my heart beat real fast.

Lily's 5 Sentence Challenge

An old ghost called Billy in a haunted house on the hill.

Billy lived in the house all alone with nobody to play with.

One day a little girl called Rose decided to visit the house.

Fearfully Rose walked up the path and knocked on the door but nobody answered.

Rose walked in through the door and Billy screamed “Boo”.

Kayden's 5 Sentence Challenge

One day I walked into a house that was so haunted it was as scary as a monster.

I nearly got eaten by a huge monster i was so mega scared and it was covered in slime and really disgusting.

I would be scared.

Nervously I crept inside.

My heart was beating fast.

Evie's 5 Sentence Challenge

The haunted hosue looks spooky.

The zombie house has scary window eyes.

If someone comes in the zombie will eat them.

The haunted house is awake and will eat you.

Zombies come to the scary house. 

Milo's 5 Sentence Challenge

The witches face was as green as grass.

A skeleton lives in the house.

Spiders crawl on the floor.

Softly bats flew in the sky.

Spiders make webs in the windows. 

Owen's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house is dark.

Ghostly things happened in this house.

I will see a vampire.

The vampire will be noty.

I will feel terribly scared.

Laila's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house is scary.

It is a stormy night.

Witches are around on this dangerous night.

There is cobwebs in the haunted house.

Electrical lightning has broken the lights, it is dark.

Jaimee's 5 Sentence Challenge

The haunted house looks dark and scary.

The vampire the lives there killed everyone in the house.

The attic is filled with vampire bats that fly at night,

If you enter the house you will surely die.

The walls are full of blood and scratches where people have tried to escape.

Sophie's 5 Sentence Challenge

The spooky house with traps.

A ghost flew out of the cobwebbed window.

The storm put a hole in the rood then rain leaked in.

I crept along the corridor and saw a bat.

A spooky girl appeared from nowhere and said hello Sophie quietly. 

Samuel's 5 Sentence Challenge

The haunted house has lots of storms thunder and lightning.

They heer the funder and lightning.

The vampire lives in the haunted house.

They frightened people.

The vampire looks scary. 

Max S' 5 Sentence Challenge

Scared and frightened I tiptoed into the haunted house.

Inside lived a wicked witch and a naughty vampire.

The dark attic was covered with horrible cobwebs.

There was a cat as black as a stormy night hissing on the door step.

All around the spooky house black bats flapped and squeaked. 

Thomas Mc's 5 Sentence Challenge

It looks scary.

It is dark.

It has lots of big windows.

It was like a giant monster.

The lightening crashed on the roof.

Siobhan's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house is very big and scary.

Scary eyes look out from the upstairs window.

I walked into the garden and sat in a tree was an owl with big, green eyes.

Inside the house lives a vampire with big teeth and a long coat.

In the kitchen stood a large chocolate cake with strawberry jam. 

Mary's 5 Sentence Challenge

A haunted house is scary.

It can have bats inside.

It also has cobwebs so it must have lots of spiders.

There could be some ghosts and skeletons.

Bravely, Scooby Doo and his friends go into the haunted house. 

Olivia P's 5 Sentence Challenge

The haunted house is a dark and scary place to live.

In the haunted house they may have some witches and ghosts.

Vampire bats fly around the house and scare people if anybody comes near.

Spooky noises came from inside the house as I banged on the big, black door.

I creep around the house without the witches hearing me but all I could hear was ghosts noises.

Donovan's 5 Sentence Challenge

The staircase is as long as a giant snake.

It looks very scary and spooky.

There are lots of ghosts and vampires.

The zombies will catch you.

Robert's 5 Sentence Challenge

The haunted house is very spooky.

The lightning came down and struck the roof with big bolts.

I went inside the house and it was full of bats and they had red eyes.

The bats floo around my head so I ran upstairs.

I saw a Dracula and he had blud running down his fas.

Gabrielle's 5 Sentence Challenge

The house is scary and dark.

Outside the lightning is flashing in the black sky.

Inside I can hear moaning zombies looking for people to eat.

Scary skeletons are hanging in the wardrobe.

Quickly I run out of the spooky house as fast as a galloping horse. 

Riley's 5 Sentence Challenge

In the haunted house lived three scary ghosts.

The ghosts were called Riley, Tom and Milo.

They spent all day flying around the scary, spooky corridors.

The whole neighbourhood were scared of the spooky ghosts.

One day the ghost busters came and zapped the three scary ghosts away.

Our first 5 Sentence Challenge!

For our homework last weekend, we all had a go at our first 5 Sentence Challenge. The prompt was ...Haunted House... We loved it! The words we used the most are in the witches hat above. Have a look at our sentences and see what you think.

Frozen Take Away Song

Today we have made up a song to help us remember how to write our take away number sentences.

We used the tune of one of our favourite songs and we blew Miss O'Donnell's socks off with how good we were at taking away! 

We all worked in pairs and didn't even need any help! 

Do you like our song?

Billy's Bucket

When @Billy_Bucket tweeted us asking for our help to find his missing sea creatures, we really wanted to help him! He asked us to make some posters to find his sea creatures. We tried to use some adjectives to describe the creatures. Have you seen any of them?

Can you help?

When we heard about the fire at Manchester Dogs' Home today, we were so sad!

We remembered all the people helped us when we had a fire in our school, like the fire fighters and ASDA who made sure all of us had a nice dinner that day.

We wanted to  help make sure the dogs who survived were well looked after and comfy in their new home with plenty of food.

To try and get lots of people to help too, we made some posters and a video.

Please have a look and see if you can do anything to help the dogs.

Dragons!

This week Mr John discovered a dragon egg whilst he was clearing the garden near our class. We looked carefully at it in class as well as looking at lots of pictures of dragons to try to help us imagine what the dragon might look like. We also thought about what it might do, where it might normally live and some other interesting facts.

The adults in class were so proud of our writing! What do you think?

Lily- Rose's 5 sentence challenge

There are so many people shuffling through the gates. The trains smoke is as fluffy as the clouds. The conductor is as tall as a giant. The train stops slowly. The black train is as dark as the night.

Zach B's 5 sentence challenge

As fast as the wind, went the train as it left the station.

Quietly the children waited for their train tickets.

The train has stopped, waiting for the people to board on their way to New York.

The sailor is waiting to get his ticket from the office

Shouting, the Controller told the passengers the time of the train.

Zach C's 5 sentence challenge

The mummy, daddy and little girl are at the train station.
They are going on holiday.
The little girl's mummy is very excited.
She has been waiting 30 minutes.
They are taking sleeping bags on their holiday.

Niamh's 5 sentence challenge

The red shooting train sat in a very busy and very big train station. Everyone was waiting for their trains rushing and running around. People where dashing to get there tickets for their summer holidays. The platforms where full of excited people. Nobody wanted to got on the slow sluggish steam train.

Lillie- Mai's 5 sentence challenge

The people were at the train station. They were there to meet their friend's. They enjoyed watching the train's pull up. It was a very nice day. The picture's look interesting.

Harry's 5 sentence challenge

The man with the white hat is fixing the 109 train wheels.

Happily, the little boy near platform eight, is waving his arms, because he is about to go on the big red train.

Struggling, the man in the red hat pushes the suitcases down platform five.

The green dress lady, is singing 'We're all going on a Summer Holiday"

The driver on the 109 train to Spain, is about to ring the bell, to tell passengers to get on the train.

Zach H's 5 sentence challenge

The picture is very colourful. There are lots of people in the picture. The people are all at a busy train station. It looks like an old picture due to the old trains. The people seem happy, maybe they are going on a holiday.

Hollie's 5 sentence challenge

Choo choo, this train will soon be leaving shouts the man. I think it is going to the sunny seaside, beautiful Brighton. Excited children whisper will it be the smoky blue train or the fire engine colour train? Quickly the people get their tickets and look very happy.

Livia's 5 sentence challenge

A really busy train station.

People are working very hard.

Happy families going on holiday.

"Thank-you" said the sailor collecting his ticket.

The train is bright red like a fire engine.

Claudia's 5 sentence challenge

Steaming gently, engine 109 waited patiently for the passengers

The engineer worked hard to oil the wheels, no more squeaks now

The children waited excitedly to pass through the gate onto platform no.8, which train is it mummy?

Looking and waiting, the little girl listened, she could hear lots on new sounds, a hiss, a bang, children laughing, parents talking and the constant click click of another ticket sold

The station master, high up in his box, shouts out a warning, train leaving platform 7 in two minutes for Whitby, all passengers hurry up.

Jack's 5 sentence challenge

You can only board the train through gates 7 and 8.
The porter is pushing all the cases to the train.
The children are excited about going on holiday.
There is a man fixing the steam train.
There are lots of people dashing about.

Lucy's 5 sentence challenge

Quickly, the mechanic mended the train.

Excitedly, the family boarded the train.

Foolishly, the boys played too close to the track.

Like ants, the passengers rushed around the station.

Shouting, the lady demanded to know when the next train to London would be leaving.

Louis' 5 sentence challenge

The train station was very crowded.

Excitedly the children waited to board the train.


The people were pushing past each other.


Crying,the boy thought he had lost his mummy.


Suddenly the family realised they were on the wrong platform.

Eve's 5 sentence challenge

The terrifying trains roared like a lion into the station. Slowly, they came to a halt. Queuing, the people quietly waited to show their tickets but the children were as cheeky as monkeys running around. Pigeons flap around for food. Everyone is going on an exciting journey.

Ben's 5 sentence challenge

The train's reminded me of Harry Potter's train the Hogwarts Express.  Quickly, the people ran to the red train.  The people were going to the seaside. It was very noisy and busy. The guard was a jolly man.

Eva's 5 sentence challenge

'I feel scared, what if the train goes too fast' said the little girl holding her dolly tightly.
The man carried his suitcases that were as heavy as an elephant.
Patiently the little girl waits to board the train.
The train station was busy and full of people waiting to go on their holiday.
Jumping with excitement, the children could not wait to get on the train.

Evie's 5 sentence challenge

 The Engineer fixed the wheels as quick as a flash. The Sailor bought a train ticket back to his ship. Strongly, the porter pushed the heavy cases. The family caught the train to London. Excitedly, the boy waved at the passing bird.

Aidan's 5 sentence challenge

The children watched the man oil the train. Happily, the sailor got his ticket for the journey. The conductor is waving the next train into platform number 6. Sadly, the man in the red hat couldn't find a trolley. The family are going on their holiday on the red train.

Saoirse's 5 sentence challenge

The station is steamy like a dragon's breath. The ruby red train whistles loudly like a kettle. The workers are helpful, carrying bags and giving directions. Excitedly, the passengers line up with their tickets. At the platforms the trains wait patiently to be filled with passengers and OFF THEY GO!

Anya's 5 sentence challenge

The little girl is watching the very good man fix the train.  She is singing her song. Then she go’s to get some sweets for her mummy , daddy , herself because she likes sweets. But her mum, dad did not know where she was and when she got back her mama,dada was not there. She was so so so so so wrured but happly the poleas found her she was so so realeefed. 

Gemma's 5 sentence challenge

The train is a colourful dark blue. The people are excited to go on the train. The numbers tell you what gate you have to go in. When the train doors open the people go inside. When they start to go the man tells them where to go.

Alex's 5 sentence challenge

With a smile on his face the mechanic oiled the train engine. In single file the family went to board the train to begin their journey. The pigeons are pecking the ground on the platform for any crumbs of food. The porter pushed his heavily loaded trolley along the platform. The children wait patiently for their tickets from the ticket stand for the train which will take them on their holidays.

Abby's 5 sentence challenge

 I can see a family getting on a big red train going on holiday. A man with a badge telling people where to go. Slowly the man pushed the trolley full of pink and red bags. The man in Uniform was singing while oiling the train wheels. The train station is as noisy and smoky as Bonfire Night.

Matteo's 5 sentence challenge

There are as many people as leaves on a tree. Why are they there?
 Pushing the trolley is hard work. where is the porter taking it?
Where will all these people go? I know I'll never know.
Compared to the size of the trains, people look like stains.
Quickly, people go to the trains. Why are they in such a rush?

Easter time!

We had such a busy time before the holidays preparing for Easter. We found out about all the special days leading up to Easter especially Holy Week. We did lots of drama, role play, art and DT to help us learn all about this important time.

We made gardens of Gethsemane...

We showed everyone how fantastic we are at singing in our Easter song show...

We took lots of care when we made our Easter story booklets and took them home so we could share the story with our families.

We also made cards, crosses and chocolate nests...

Surprisingly, just before we went home on the last day, we came back from lunch to find footprints from a special visitor. The Easter Bunny had been! He'd left us lots of clues which we followed and eventually found a basket full of treats. After waiting for 15 minutes, we had to send out a search party for Mr Kerton and his group who got rather lost... we were very happy when they joined the rest of the class at the finish so we could share the treats together!

The Three Little Pigs Science Investigation

At the end of our science work on materials we looked at the houses the pigs had made and which material was the strongest. We decided to build some houses for the pigs using the materials we had in school and at home to investigate whether they were strong enough to keep the wolf away.
After we had finished our building jobs, we tested the houses outside to see if we could blow them down. We had so much fun!